Thursday, March 30, 2006

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I hated when the hair from your jacket marked my palms and lingered on the lycra fabric stripe of my pants
..............but I remember when the pines of your inchoate beard laughed in my ear

I hated when the snake of the road before our minds and the chilled leather cracks seemed to divide us when it was really the woman I followed in my dreams
..............but I remember when the minutes turned to mud because the water in your arms squeezed the crunchy leaves out of my eyes

I hated when the loops of rolled syllables and the transparent blahs circled into a never-ending metal cord which coiled into kinks building tilted stairs that lead to holes
.............but I remember the flint incense in your iris when you showed me how to guide the syringe into my gelding's vein and let the blood swirl with evaporated tears

7 Comments:

At 10:17 PM, Blogger Ariel said...

this is simply beautiful.

 
At 9:21 AM, Blogger Charity said...

haha you are so egotistical...

but really, ashel, this is your best, and that's saying something.

 
At 9:12 PM, Blogger Jeff.p said...

I totally agree with Charity, I don't even know what to add to her comment, just posting that I concur cause it gives Ashels joy when people post in her blog.

 
At 9:13 PM, Blogger Jeff.p said...

p.s., I know, my picture is Captain Kirk, I'm a loser, such is life.

 
At 11:45 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is so good I'd like to wrap it up, put lettuce and feta cheese all around it, and sell it on street corners. Bravo!!!!!!!!!!

 
At 10:39 AM, Blogger Charity said...

I love you.

 
At 10:50 PM, Blogger Charity said...

look, now you have 7 comments!

ps: you are really good-looking

 

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