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I hated when the hair from your jacket marked my palms and lingered on the lycra fabric stripe of my pants
..............but I remember when the pines of your inchoate beard laughed in my ear
I hated when the snake of the road before our minds and the chilled leather cracks seemed to divide us when it was really the woman I followed in my dreams
..............but I remember when the minutes turned to mud because the water in your arms squeezed the crunchy leaves out of my eyes
I hated when the loops of rolled syllables and the transparent blahs circled into a never-ending metal cord which coiled into kinks building tilted stairs that lead to holes
.............but I remember the flint incense in your iris when you showed me how to guide the syringe into my gelding's vein and let the blood swirl with evaporated tears


7 Comments:
this is simply beautiful.
haha you are so egotistical...
but really, ashel, this is your best, and that's saying something.
I totally agree with Charity, I don't even know what to add to her comment, just posting that I concur cause it gives Ashels joy when people post in her blog.
p.s., I know, my picture is Captain Kirk, I'm a loser, such is life.
This is so good I'd like to wrap it up, put lettuce and feta cheese all around it, and sell it on street corners. Bravo!!!!!!!!!!
I love you.
look, now you have 7 comments!
ps: you are really good-looking
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